Before I am Famous

Okay right now I am procrastinating. I should be working on my novella. I love saying that but instead I am here chatting it up with everyone. I read in one of those long lost magazines that this sometimes happens. But on a brighter note, I am glad that my story didn’t get published, it is is not as good as it should be. I know, I know the word “was” is a very weak word, in short B-O-R-I-N-G. I am allowed to say this because it is my own work.

Anyway… I use was too much. There are some instances where the word is okay and other times it makes the sentence lame. Case in point a sentence in my story reads, “…Bobby was content with working in the factory and growing old in Bloomingdale,” will be changed to “…while working in the factory and growing old in Bloomingdale contented Bobby.” Now isn’t that 100 times better. Its okay you can agree with me.

Wacky Walnuts time is a-wasting, I better get on with the bigger picture and get some polishing done. I want this to be the best thing I ever produced, well at least for right now!

Have a wonderful night!

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