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Fire Loins

Posted on | July 4, 2008 | 3 Comments

Hot cayenne peppers ripening
scorching blaze skin sizzling
sullen puddle drops rising
warm hands breath sighing


sweet hope warmth grows
enraptured volcano sun spewing

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3 Responses to “Fire Loins”

  1. The Devastatingly Handsome Guy Who Dreams of Becoming a Coroner
    July 4th, 2008 @ 4:04 am

    That was pretty good.

    The Devastatingly Handsome Guy Who Dreams of Becoming a Coroners last blog post..you rock! you rule!

  2. Writing Nag
    July 10th, 2008 @ 10:45 am

    Very good! I played this week, last week I was enjoying those sizzling peppers in the heat of Santa Fe.

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