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The Desperate Need to Be Gone

Posted on | August 1, 2008 |

Today and Tomorrow it is to the beach I go.
to walk along amongst sea creatures
On the beach to dance around
Cling to the past sandy trails.

Below in to you the sun fall.
Ever brisk as a breeze to my face.
Always there to sea and shore.

Halcyon days to clam the ocean.

Torrid asphalt no gas to beach
To stare at futility across water, Tokyo-3

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8 Responses to “The Desperate Need to Be Gone”

  1. Chato
    August 1st, 2008 @ 5:57 am

    That was fun, i like that way you mixed them all together to make the poem. I’m already working on the next poem to enter.

    Thanks,

    Chato

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  2. AvidReader
    August 1st, 2008 @ 9:46 am

    Another great combined effort. I too like how you arrange them and come up with a title. We will definitely keep playing. Thanks for hosting this!

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    August 1st, 2008 @ 1:08 pm

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  4. CyberCelt
    August 2nd, 2008 @ 5:58 am

    Hello!

    I recognized your dragon! The link back project page is returning a 404 not found message. Just wanted you to know.

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  5. News-N-Views
    August 2nd, 2008 @ 6:11 am

    Poems are the replication of everyone’s core of the heart. The heart were all the small things keep safe and you just invoked your small core of the heart in front of the world. It is nice to read it. Requesting you to please keep it up the work for long life. Coz, it has got inspiration for someone (Like me)

    Regards,

    News-N-Views

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  6. Posh Post Reviews
    August 2nd, 2008 @ 9:15 am

    oh very very nice…i like the mental picture it creates. :) thanks!

    God bless you!

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  7. Aimey
    August 2nd, 2008 @ 6:38 pm

    I love your poems! They’re really pretty. I wrote about them on my blog.
    http://cherry-blossom.us/2008/08/02/pretty-poems/

    your layout’s pretty too really easy on the eyes.

    Aimeys last blog post..Pretty Poems

  8. Exquisite Corpse for Aug 1st | Wildheart’s Works
    August 11th, 2008 @ 1:57 am

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